As mentioned in Week 4, we want you to incorporate a short video on your blog. Options for uploading your video include YouTube and Vimeo. Sign-up and explore these during the semester break, and try uploading a video.
Overview of YouTube.
Overview of Vimeo.
Differences between YouTube and Vimeo.
For anyone still unsure how to embed videos in their blog, have a look at these WordPress guidelines for both YouTube and Vimeo.
If you want to post your own music on your blog, you could consider uploading it to SoundCloud. Then follow these simple WordPress guidelines for embedding tracks from SoundCloud.
How did everyone get on with last week’s homework task to find some useful books for the essay? Hopefully you all made it to the library…
As we are just about halfway through the course, this week we are going to check out all the class blogs and see how many of you are up-to-date and on top of everything. To do this, we are going to do some peer-reviewing. So, select the blog of someone else in the class, check to see if it covers the points listed below (some are taken from previous weeks), and then report back to the class with a short summary.
- Is there an ‘About’ description on the sidebar? (using the ‘Text’ widget)
- Is there an altered tagline (it should not say the default ‘Just another WordPress blog’)
- Have images been inserted into blog posts?
- Does the blog have a custom header graphic?
- Are there at least 5 links to other blogs/websites in the sidebar Blogroll? Are these links relevant and useful?
- Has the initial default ‘Hello World’ post been deleted?
- What is the blog about? Are its aims and intentions clear?
- Does the blog contain some RSS feeds? Are these relevant to the blog’s content?
- Does the blog contain RSS Links and/or the Subscribe button?
- Has the Search facility been incorporated?
- Does the blog contain a Twitter feed? Is it relevant?
- Does the blog contain the two brief posts that were requested in week 3? (one that introduces the blogger to the reader, and one about ideas for the essay and blog)
- Is there a post on 3 Australian music industry blogs, as requested in week 4?
- Is there a post on books that will be used for the essay, as requested in week 5?
- Is there a post on a particular social networking website, as requested in week 5?
- What attempts have been made to personalise the blog? How effective are these personalised elements?
- Do the blog posts make use of link text? Are the links ’relevant’? Do they support any of the points made in posts? Is there explanation of why and how the link is relevant or of interest?
- Does the blog look like something you would like to read and follow? If so, what is it about the blog that you find appealing? If not, what are the problems, and do you have any suggestions for improvement?
- What useful points are being made in posts, or what ideas are being explored? Are they of use to anyone in the course, or in the music industry, or in general?
- Do the posts merely describe something? Or do they add any useful analysis, or any critique relevant to the course? Writing doesn’t have to be academically formal within a blog post, but effective writing still requires some attempt to provide insight / meaning / value to the reader. What value do the posts provide?
- If any interesting examples of artists, media, companies, etc. are mentioned, is there adequate explanation of what opportunities and/or challenges are represented by these examples, or represented by the way they have been developed, produced or distributed?
- Does it look like consideration has been given to the implications (or opportunities / challenges / risks) of the topic being written about – for a musician’s research / collaboration / production / feedback / distribution? What are any implications for the music industry as a whole?
Essays
Following on from last week’s academic writing and research tips, here are a few more things you might want to keep in mind when planning your essay.
Read through the course guide section on Essay Assessment Criteria, and note the 3 areas you are assessed on: reading and research; argument and analysis; and writing and structure.
We will look at reading and research in more detail after the break, but remember that web-based references alone are not sufficient. The essays that typically get the highest marks are the ones by students who have bothered to go to the library and check the field of literature. You need to make use of authoritative, primary research.
To answer a common question: how many outside references? The answer is – as many as you need to provide an adequate response. If you use internet sources, please ensure they are reputable and have a degree of critical integrity.
For argument and analysis, note that critical theory, critical analysis and critical thinking are the key points to remember. We aren’t looking for simple description. We are looking for some in-depth consideration of your chosen topic area.
In regard to writing and structure, one of the big problems with essays is the use of colloquial language, rather than a more formal academic style. While we don’t mind if people write using the same vocabulary they might use when they speak (and we don’t want people using a bunch of words they have no idea about), at the same time make sure that your assertions are formalised.
When using quotes from references (which you should do to support your own arguments), make sure you actually contextualise the quote you use… don’t just “drop in” fancy sounding quotes and move on… make use of the quote, demonstrate that it contributes to your argument… or don’t use at all…
READ YOUR ESSAY ALOUD. Read it to someone else if you can. It really helps to make for a more coherent piece of writing.
Structuring your essay is important, and is something that is often overlooked. Ensure you include an introduction and a conclusion:
Introduction
Introductions are extremely important as they identify the subject area and the question(s) you want to explore, provide a rationale, set the extent and limits of your research, and therefore set the terms on which your essay may be judged. It is often a good idea to write a draft introduction early on, to get your ideas clear and to remind yourself what you are doing and why, but then put it on one side and write the final version last. Your introduction should briefly summarise the structure and organisation of what follows.
Conclusion
Do, by all means, include here a summary of what’s gone before, but make it short. Try to angle it towards underlining the value of the exercise (which you may not have had opportunity to deal with yet). The best conclusions are those which do more than merely look back and recapitulate. Try to draw together some thoughts towards answering questions you raiser earlier, and, if appropriate (and it usually is), indicate how you see your essay opening up an area for further research.
Homework for Week 7
By now you should have a firm idea of what you are going to discuss in your essay. So in preparation for some more peer-review work that we will do after the break, write a blog post that acts as an introduction to your essay. This doesn’t need to be the exact final version that you will use in your essay, but rather a paragraph that succinctly and formally describes what your essay will focus on, in line with the ‘Introduction’ guidelines above.